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Where Do We End?

Here we are again after all the things we said.
Stop looking at me like that.
‘Cause I know what you’re thinking.
But now I really don’t care.

You still make my knees go weak.
And make my heart feel so sick inside.
You look right through me without realizing.
Why don’t you just stab me through the heart?

(Chorus)
Just strip away your mask of lies.
And let me see through your insecurities.
You promised me the truth.
I promised you no lies.
So tell me now.
Where do we end?

Hell I didn’t think I’d be standing here.
Watching the tears stream down your face.
When you finally figured out that no one else cares.
You seem so pathetic but I’m just as weak.

And you give me that hopeful, painful gaze.
That makes me want to hold you all over again.
Why not just one last time?
For you I would, for a once true friend.

(Chorus)
So strip away your mask of lies.
And let me see through your insecurities.
You promised me the truth.
I promised you no lies.
So tell me now.
Where do we end?

Spiraling through the memories.
To the last dance.
You don’t want to let go.
You don’t want to say goodbye.
Not again, not ever.
But it’s to late now.

(Chorus)
Just strip away your mask of lies.
And let me see through your insecurities.
You promised me the truth.
I promised you no lies.
So tell me now.
Where do we end?
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Author's Comments

"So I was thinking about someone that was weighing down on my heart. Then I looked at the blank page in front of my eyes and let the words flow free." :heart:

Basically, I'm dealing with a friend whose taken me for granted time and again and I'm trying really hard not to care about. But at the same time I worry because if that person finds out how many people are sick of the b/s it may hurt them deeply. So it's sort of a dilemma. Or maybe not. I blame my empathy for others. Old habits die hard.

Anyway, do tell me what you think. Writing song lyrics isn't my strong point yet but I wanted to give it a try.

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:iconrikualbeltidus23:
I like this very much!!! :heart: It's pretty cool, lol! Nice job!!

--
"RAINBOW!"
"A rainbow? Where?"
"No, she means L'arc~en~Ciel."
"What the heck is a L'arc~en~Ciel?"
"A rainbow!"
"No, it MEANS rainbow."
"......"
" *sigh* It's a French-named Japanese rock band."
"....the rainbow is a French-named Japanese band? Cool."
:iconbookfairy14:
Thanks :hug: I really appreciate it. You're always very supportive of me. :aww:

--
"You came. Even though you're about to break. That's a good sign... so why did you come?" Aerith :rose:
--
Creativity is a reflection of my own uniqueness as a person. :butterflytwo:
:iconchocolate-wing-ding:
make it a song! it sounds so powerful!

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: <<This is a rainbow

:bulletpink::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: <<This ISN'T

STOP REPLACING THE RED WITH PINK D<
:icondolphin64575:
amazing! wish i could hear it irl!

--
This situation is a big bucket of shit, and I just keep cutting potatoes into it trying to make it a stew.
~Rosalarian
:iconbookfairy14:
Wow I just found this comment ^^; thank you so much! :heart:

--
"You came. Even though you're about to break. That's a good sign... so why did you come?" Aerith :rose:
--
Creativity is a reflection of my own uniqueness as a person. :butterflytwo:
:iconbookfairy14:
Thanks! Actually one of my friends is making a CD so I might contribute to it. :3

--
"You came. Even though you're about to break. That's a good sign... so why did you come?" Aerith :rose:
--
Creativity is a reflection of my own uniqueness as a person. :butterflytwo:
:iconchocolate-wing-ding:
^^ You're welcome, I really like it ^^

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: <<This is a rainbow

:bulletpink::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: <<This ISN'T

STOP REPLACING THE RED WITH PINK D<
:icondolphin64575:
sooooooo cool!

--
This situation is a big bucket of shit, and I just keep cutting potatoes into it trying to make it a stew.
~Rosalarian
:iconbookfairy14:
Thanks so much <3

--
"You came. Even though you're about to break. That's a good sign... so why did you come?" Aerith :rose:
--
Creativity is a reflection of my own uniqueness as a person. :butterflytwo:

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